Prosze o pomoc!!! Poprawcie te dwa teksty (sama je napisalam) jeśli mają gdzieś błędy, priszę napisać to czytelnie. Wszystkie odpowiedzi, ktore mi pomoga nagrodze, a jedna wybiore na najlepsze.
Tekst 1
Me and my band "D-band" play a pop music.
Today we be in the USA. There are very good!
We got tickets at the concert Demi Lovato and go right him. At the concert I met another pop singer - Selena Gomez! When we came back to the Polish passed through famous bridge - Golden Gate. (Ja i mój zespół "D-band" gramy muzyke pop. Dziś jestesmy w USA. Jest tu bardzo fajnie! Dostaliśmy bilety na koncert DEMI Lovato i idziemy na niego. Na koncercie spotkalam inną piosenkarke pop - Selene Gomez! Kiedy wracalismy do Polski przejezdzalismy przez sławny most - Golden Gate.)
Tekst 2
21 st May
Im having a great time on tour with the Metal Monkeys. We play heavy metal music. I sing and play the drums.
At the moment we're in Britain. We've been to London, where were many monuments.
Such as: Big Ben is a big bell wighing 14 tons, Buckingham Palace it is the official palace, now inhabited by Queen Elizabeth II and the Tower Bridge is a popular bridge built of two connected towers. There were great Tommorow we are going to France.
22 th May
Finally we landed in France! A couple of hours of hard road. Now we go to Paris. There arebeautiful! We are on the Eiffel Tower, I can see the entire Paris. We are in the Grewin Museums, here ends our tour of Paris.
Bye!
W 2 tekscie tak jakby pisze bloga. Prosze pomozcie mi! I sprawdzcie czy nie popelnilam zadnych bledow. Pomozcie!!
:) Za najlepsza odpowiedz dam 50 pkt.
Tekst 1
Me and my band "D-band" play a pop music.
Today we be in the USA. There are very good!
We got tickets at the concert Demi Lovato and go right him. At the concert I met another pop singer - Selena Gomez! When we came back to the Polish passed through famous bridge - Golden Gate. (Ja i mój zespół "D-band" gramy muzyke pop. Dziś jestesmy w USA. Jest tu bardzo fajnie! Dostaliśmy bilety na koncert DEMI Lovato i idziemy na niego. Na koncercie spotkalam inną piosenkarke pop - Selene Gomez! Kiedy wracalismy do Polski przejezdzalismy przez sławny most - Golden Gate.)
Tekst 2
21 st May
Im having a great time on tour with the Metal Monkeys. We play heavy metal music. I sing and play the drums.
At the moment we're in Britain. We've been to London, where were many monuments.
Such as: Big Ben is a big bell wighing 14 tons, Buckingham Palace it is the official palace, now inhabited by Queen Elizabeth II and the Tower Bridge is a popular bridge built of two connected towers. There were great Tommorow we are going to France.
22 th May
Finally we landed in France! A couple of hours of hard road. Now we go to Paris. There arebeautiful! We are on the Eiffel Tower, I can see the entire Paris. We are in the Grewin Museums, here ends our tour of Paris.
Bye!
W 2 tekscie tak jakby pisze bloga. Prosze pomozcie mi! I sprawdzcie czy nie popelnilam zadnych bledow. Pomozcie!!
:) Za najlepsza odpowiedz dam 50 pkt.
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Today we ARE in the USA. IT IS very good HERE!
We got tickets TO Demi Lovato CONCERT and WENT right THERE. At the concert I met another pop singer - Selena Gomez! When we came back POLAND WE passed through A famous bridge - Golden Gate.
Tekst 2
21st May
I'm having a great time on tour with the Metal Monkeys. We play heavy metal music. I sing and play the drums.
At the moment we're in Britain. We've been to London. THERE WERE LOTS OF MONUMENTS THERE, such as: Big Ben, WHICH is a big bell wEighing 14 tons, Buckingham Palace, WHICH it is the official palace, now inhabited by Queen Elizabeth II, and the Tower Bridge, WHICH is a popular bridge built of two connected towers. IT were great THERE. Tomorrow we are going to France.
22 th May
Finally we landed in France! A couple of hours of A TIRING FLIGHT. Now we go to Paris. IT IS BEATIFUL HEREl! We are on the Eiffel Tower. I can see the entire Paris. We are in the Grewin Museum, here ends our tour of Paris.
Bye!
Today we're in the USA.
it is very good here!
We got tickets to Demi Lovato concert and went right there.
When we came back Poland we passed through a famous bridge - Golden Gate.
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there're lots MONUMENTS there, such as: Big Ben, which is a big bell weighing fourteen tons, Buckingham Palace, which it is the official palace, now inhabited by Queen Elizabeth II, and the Tower Bridge, which is a popular bridge built of two connected towers.it were great there. Tomorrow we are going to France.
Finally we landed in France! A couple of hours of A tiring flight. it is beatiful here!
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