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Nowadays a lot of people often change their job, but I think that better is stay in an one company all life.
Firstly, we can obtain a good position in the company. After a few years of employment we usually gets promoted and a rise of salary, and also achove a higher status in the company.
secondly, we gets to know the company inside out. We know what kinds of behaviour are excepted but when we start work in a new pleace we must lern new rules.
On the other hand, working all time in the same company gets specialised us and we lose many of our skills which we can develop change job in our life.
To sum up, I think that is better to stay in the same work all life becouse we it is very importan to have sure about our position in company and about our finance.
Nowadays a lot of people often change their job, but I think that IT IS better TO stay in (BEZ AN)one company FOR THE WHOLE life.
Firstly, we can obtain a good position in the company. After a few years of employment we usually GET promoted and a rise of OUR salary, and also ACHIEVE a higher status in the company.
Secondly, we GET to know the company inside out. We know what KIND of behaviour IS excepted WHILE when we start workING in a new pleace we must LEARN new rules.
On the other hand, working all THE time in the same company WE ARE specialised IN ONLY ONE FIELD and we lose many of our skills which we COULD develop IF WE changeD jobS.
To sum up, I think that IT is better to stay in the same work THE WHOLE life becAuse it is very importanT to BE sure about our position in company and about our finance.
*but I think (that) it's better to stay in one company all life.
Przed "one" nie dajemy "an", bo to w zasadzie znaczy to samo ;)
*we usually get promoted
To liczba mnoga, nie dodajemy -s
*achieve, nie "achove"
Mam nadzieję, że to literówka.
*secondly, we gets...
Patrz druga gwiazdka.
*we start work
To jest niepoprawnie. "Start to work" albo "start working".
*working all time in the same company gets specialised us...
Nie wiem co do końca chciałaś powiedzieć.
*which we can develop change job in our life.
Powiedziałbym "which we could develop changing"
*I think it is better to stay...
Choć "that" chyba też by przeszło.
*important to have sure about
Chyba "to be sure" ??