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My character called Kate Evans. She is an artist. She has got 172 cm tall. She like riding on horses and ponies. She like cooking too. She is 27 years old. She is pretty, slim and smart. She has got a big, blue eyes and medium nose. She has got freckles. She’s hair are black and ruffled. She’s hair are pinned into the bun. She has got small, black earrings. She’s nose is small . She’s mouth are light pink and medium. She has got thin rogue. She has got a beautiful locket. It is made of silver and diamonds. Inside she put a photo of her black horse. She has got a black belt. She has got a charm bracelet. She has got a very small ring. She is wearing emerald dress with ruffles. She wear dark blue heels-shoes with big, blue jewel. I like she and she’s fashion style.
tam gdzie masz she's hair are black and ruffied to potem znowu masz she's hair are pinned into the sun. Ja sugeruję ze mozesz napisac to w jednym zdaniu czyli she's hair are blach, ruffied and pinned into the sun. :) a pozatym wszystko ok.
My character called Kate Evans. She is an artist. She has got 172 cm tall. She like riding on horses and ponies. She like cooking too. She is 27 years old. She is pretty, slim and smart. She has got a big, blue eyes and medium big nose. She has got freckles. She’s hair are black and ruffled. She’s hair are pinned into the bun. She has got small, black earrings. She’s nose is small . She’s mouth are light pink and medium. She has got thin rogue. She has got a beautiful locket. It is made of silver and diamonds. Inside she put a photo of her black horse. She has got a black belt. She has got a charm bracelet. She has got a very small ring. She is wearing emerald dress with ruffles. She wear dark blue heels-shoes with big, blue jewel. I like she and she’s fashion style.
ja bym dodała w tym medium nose jszcze big a tak to ok