Question

Proszę o sprawdzenie wyprocowania "My favorite band"

I like listening to rock music and especially to the band Bon Jovi. It is an American rock group that started in 1983. In the band there are 5 musicians: Jon Bon Jovi, Richie Sambora, Hugh McDonald, Tico Torres, David Bryan. They started playing or singing when they were very young. They are one of the best rock groups in the world. They were very popular at the of the 1990s. They sold many recordings and made a lot of money.

I think that their the best record is "Keep the Faith" which comes from the year 92'. My favorite songs are: Keep the Faith, It's my life and Livin' on a Prayer. I like Bon Jovi very much.

Answer 1

według mnie jest dobrze

sprawdzałam kilka razy i nie znalazłam błędów. ;)