Proszę o sprawdzenie ułożonego przeze mnie tekstu :) Jest to legenda o Slendermanie : Slenderman. A long time ago, in a ordinary playground, ordinary children were playing. Happy parents did their pictures. But a few years later, they noticed a strange character at the back of the photo. They ignored it. But that character was appeared in a few others photos. That was a little strange. And that was strange, because all that children were be at the photo was killed or kidnapped. They started investigation. Character was very tall. He wore black suit and black pants. He wore a red tie. Sometimes, people saw a long legs or tentacles on the photo. And something is very scare, he wasn’t have face and he was white. That was mysterious. One person saw Slender in the forest. This person couldn’t find a way out of the forest, but when she found 8 pages with strange drawings she found exit. Slender was appeared in scary and strange places like hospital, abandoned elementary school, forest, sanatorium, abandoned prison and others. One thing is very strange, children liked Slender, when they saw him, they followed him. Maybe he used tentacles to hypnosis. Everybody were excited. People created a few computer games about Slenderman. That was easy game, but very scare. Legend saying, if you saw a Slenderman, you’ll die.
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....Happy parents were taking photos to them. ....background of the photo. ...all that children, which were at the photo have been killed or....He was wearing....at the photo...And something, which is really scare is he hasn't got face...One thing, that is very strange is the children....Legend is saying.... :D
at an zamiast in a
were taking pictures but a few years later (chodzi o to, żeby nie zaczynać niepotrzebnie nowego zdania, wszędzie tam, gdzie masz but na początku zdania, popraw to. But nie może być początkiem nowego zdania, powinno być kontynuacją poprzedniego)
character appeared
at a few other photos
That was a little strange and... (podobna sytuacja do but, nie zaczynaj w ten sposób zdań)
children who were in
in the photo (nie on)
ta sama sytuacja z and...
very scary
he had no face
Slender appeared
to hypnotise
created few (a few oznacza niewiele)
very scary
Legend says that if...