Question

Proszę o sprawdzenie tekstu o Newtonie, napisałem go sam ale mam wrażenie że jest kilka błedów. Wielkie dzięki.

It was in 17 September 1665. That day Isaac Newton felt sick. In afternoon he was resting under an apple tree. When he was getting up he heard noise, he looked up and apple fell on his nose. Newton thought about the falling apple for many years. Suddenly he came up with the answer and started writing book about it. Finally, he published his Theory of Gravitation.

Answer 1

It was in 17th September 1665. Isaac Newton in that day felt sick. In the afternoon he rested under an apple tree. When he was getting up he heard a noise, so he looked up and an apple fell on his nose. Newton was thinking about the falling apple for many years. Suddenly he came up with the answer and started writing a book about it. Finally, he published his Theory of Gravitation.