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Dear Sir I am writing to apply for scholarship. I am student of Unversity in Łodź. Jaunt to Scotland is my dream. I speak English fluntly. The grant is important to me because I can not afford to pay for studying alone. I would like to focus on learning because it is very time consuming and I can not work while studying. Moreover interested on Scotish culture. I feel I am suitable candidate for this scholarship because I complete all criteria that can be found on the website. I have additional achievements in the field of intertwined with education. I am interested in English, which helped me to win a great deal precious experience. I am most proud of winning to many English Competitions. However, studying in Scotish it a financial barrier. Unfortunately I'm not able to finance my studies. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully. XYZ

Answer 1

Dear Sir

I am writing to apply for a scholarship. I am a student of Unversity in Łodź. A journey to Scotland is my dream. I speak English fluently. The scholarship is important for me because I can not afford to pay for school myself . I would like to focus on learning because it is very time consuming and I can not work while I am studying. Moreover, I am interested in Scottish culture. I think I am a suitable candidate for this scholarship because I fulfill all acceptance criteria that can be found on the website. I have additional achievements in fields intertwined with education. I am interested in English, which helped me to win precious experience. I am the most proud of winning many English competitions. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

XYZ

Answer 2

Szanowny PaniePiszędo ubiegania się ostypendium.JestemstudentemUnversityw Łodzi.Jauntdo Szkocjijest moje marzenie.Mówię po angielskufluntly.Dotacja jestdla mnie ważne, bo niestać na płaceniezastudiasam.Chciałbymskupić się na nauce, bo jest bardzoczasochłonne inie mogę pracowaćw czasie studiów.Ponadtozainteresowaninaszkockakultura.Czuję, że jestemodpowiednim kandydatem dotego stypendium, bowypełnić wszystkiekryteria, które można znaleźćna stronie internetowej.Mamdodatkowe osiągnięcia wdziedzinieprzeplata się zedukacji.Jestem zainteresowanyw języku angielskim,którypomógł mi zdobyćwielecennych doświadczeń.Jestem bardzodumny zwygranejdowielu angielskichkonkursach.Jednakstudia wszkockatobariera finansowa.Niestetynie jestemw stanie sfinansowaćstudia.Czekam nakontakt z Państwem.Z poważaniem.XYZ

 

 

 

to po angielsku znaczy dosłownie spróbuj po pracować nad tym a tak ogólnie to dobrze z drobnymi błędami