Proszę o sprawdzenie opowiadania ; So far, everything had gone according to his plans He closed the door and was just about to run his car when suddenly he saw that the tyre was flated. There were letter on the back seat. It showed “ watch you daughter”, It made him very nervous so he calls the police. After that he had driven to kindergarden to check what happened with her daughter. It turned out she had been kidnapped. He and his wife were worried and they didn’t know what they should have done. When they had been waiting for information from police, the phone rang. He received a call and he heard base, scary voice. This person was from mafia and he wanted 500 000 $ for ransom. Unfortunately they didn’t have enough money but police traced the number. After few hours abductor had called again and they determined about place where ransom was surrendered. Parents arrived to dark forest with funny money. Of course, police encircled territory and it would seem that they were saved but they weren’t. Two muscular men got out from car. Little girl was in the car, she looked petrified. Parents gave them funny money and little girl was released to parents. They come back home and went to sleep. There were exhausted because it was really bad day. Family realized that they couldn’t be saved event in home so they employed security guard. Odpowiedzi "wszystko dobrze" możecie sobie darować. Z góry dziękuję.
Dobra treść ale mało bogatych słów...
So far, everything had gone according to his plans.He closed the door and was just about to run his car when suddenly he saw that the tyre was flat. There were also some letters on the back seat. They were warning: “ watch you daughter”. It made him very nervous so he called the police. After that he drove to kindergarden to check what had happened to his daughter. It turned out she had been kidnapped. He and his wife were terrified and they didn’t know what they should do in such a strange and difficult situation. While they were waiting for any information from the police, the man's phone rang. He received a call and he heard a base, scary voice. That person belonged to mafia and he wanted 500 000 $ ransom. It meant their daughter washeld for ransom. Unfortunately, they didn’t have enough money but the police traced the number. After a few hours the abductor called once again and they took the decision about the place where the ransom would be passed. The girl's parents arrived to a dark forest with the proper sum of money which they have been borrowed. Of course, a group of policemen encircled the area and it would seem that they were saved but they weren’t. Two muscular men got out ofa car. The little girl was inside the car, she looked petrified. Her parents gave the men the funny money and the small girl was released. They came back home and went to bed. There were happy but exhausted because it was really a bad day. The family realized that they couldn’t be safe event at home so they employed some security guards.
Mam nadzieję, że pomogłam :)