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Proszę o sprawdzenie mojego wypracowania (w załączniku temat)


Hi everyone! Guess what I did last week!
I was in grade school named "Maya the bee" when I went 10 years ago. The school is located in Biała near Radzyń Podlaski. I went there for visited place when I spend a lot of time. Firstly I met professors who's teach me. I heard a lot of nice memories. Then I joined in chemistry lesson. It was very interesting. I saw that school upgraded laboratory. In the end I went to hall where I saw new seats and TV's on walls. Kids was there very happy.
I think that this place is better that it was. School has become a modern and clean. It's good for pupils.
It was a brilliant day!

Answer 1

Hi everyone! Guess what I did last week!
I was in grade school named "Maya the bee" when I was 10 years ago. The school is located in Biała near Radzyń Podlaski. I went there to visit the place where I have spent a lot of time. Firstly, I met professors who had taught me. I heard(chcesz powiedzieć "usłyszałem dużo miłych wspomnień", czy "mam/miałem"?) a lot of nice memories. Then, I joined the chemistry class. It was very interesting. I noticed that the school has upgraded the laboratory. In the end, I went to the hall where I saw new seats and TV's on the walls. Kids were there very happy. 
I think that this place is better that it was before. The school has become more modern and cleaner. It's good for pupils.
It was a brilliant day!

Answer 2

Where i attended 10 years ago
i went there to visit the place where i spent a lot of time 
who taught me 
the chemistry lesson 
i saw that the school has upgraded the laboratory
to the hall 
kids were there very happy
better than it used to be 
the school has became a lot modern and clean