Question

Proszę o sprawdzenie mojego speecha z angielskiego.

I don’t agree with sentence, that if we spoke the same language, there would be fewer conflict and war. In Poland we speak the same language and we have a lot of conflict. People jangle about everything. We can see this in television, internet and radio. Politicians make a lot of fuss. They speak the same language, have the same culture. That can change nothing, because they like jangle. The thing only about authorities. This is next problem. The same language can never change if people want to have authorities. People can make everything if they want to rule. Nowadays a lot of conflict is in religion way for example Hebrews and Muslims in Jerozolima. There we can see war. A lot of people die. This is stupid unnecessary and pointless. Language isn’t problem. Many people learn English. If someone can’t speak other language. He can employ translator. Language isn’t objection. We must change himself, otherwise it we can lead to the end of the world. We should resolve conflicts in a peaceful way. I hope that my speech will help us and we will understand that different language isn’t objection.

Answer 1

I don’t agree with THE sentence, that if we WOULD  SPEAK IN the same language, there WILL be fewer CONFLICTS  and WARS. In Poland we speak the same language and we have a lot of conflictS. People jangle about everything. We can see this in television, internet and radio. Politicians make a lot of fuss. They speak the same language, have the same culture. That WON'T change ANYTHING, because they like jangleING. The thing only about authorities. This is next problem. The same language can never change if people want to have authorities. People can make everything if they want to rule. Nowadays a lot of conflict  is in religion, for example Hebrews and Muslims in Jerozolima. There we can see  ALOT OF WARS GOING ON. A lot of people die. This is stupid unnecessary and pointless. Language isn’t  A problem. Many people learn English. If someone can’t speak other language. He can employ translator. Language isn’t objection. We must change OURself, otherwise  we can lead to the end of the world. We should resolve conflicts in a peaceful way. I hope that my speech will help us and we will understand that different languageS AREN'T OBJECTION.

 

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