Question

Proszę o sprawdzenie krótkiego wypracowania z ang.:

Temat: My ideal job

I think that an ideal job for me would be a computer scientist.
I want to go for technikum informatic to learn more something about computers. This direction is still expand. This requires large memory and intelligence, but does not require physical labor. Unfortunatelly most computer scientists wear glasses, becouse they must all day to sit at the computer.
Even so computer scientist is my ideal job and I think in future I will be a good computer scientist.

Answer 1

Według mnie nie ma tu błędu