Question

proszę o sprawdzenie czy jest to mniej więcej dobrze napisane i czy nie ma błędów ;) z gory dzięki.
Music is wonderful thing. When I listen to music, I forget about the whole world. Then everything is easy. I don't know what I would have done without it. I often listen to music. When I go to school, coming home and many other situations. I can't live without it. My favourite kind of music is reggae. I listening to this for over two years. It makes me forget about the real world and I immersed in a world of dream. Legend of this music is Bob Marley. He became the first famous celebrities, who comes from a Third World country.

Answer 1

Wszystko dobrze tylko nie pisz "Listen to music" tylko poprostu "Listen music"

 

:)

Answer 2

dobrze myślę, że niebędzie problemu z tym zadaneiem przy sprawdzeniu przez nauczyciela .Jeśli wgl będzie sprawdzał.