Proszę o sprawdzenie czy dobrze ;) Last summer holidays I was in Mielnio with my freinds.We spend there one week. All time was warm and shining sun. We lived opposite the sea in WIlla Amba . There was beautiful and clean . We long slept , because we went to bed late . While holidays we was spnding activ time.We swam in sea , rode a bike and ran. We went to Kołobrzeg, because we saw ther place.We were very happy, but tired the returning.
Ja bym to poprawila tak:
Last sammer I spent* my holidays in Mielno with my friends.
We spent* fantastic week there.
All the time the weather was shinning and warming.
We lived opposite the sea in Willa Amba.
There were beautiful and clean.
We slept a really long time because we went to sleep late.
Our holidays were really active because we swam in sea, rode a bike and ran a lot.
We went back to our family city - Kolobrzeg with such an amazing memories!
(my wrocilismy z powrotem do naszego rodzinnego miasta - Kolobrzegu z niesamowitymi wspomnieniami)
* czasownik 'spend' czyli 'spędzac' w czasie przeszlym to 'spent', bo to czasownik nieregularny
a skoro wydarzenie (twoje wakacje) mialy miejsce w przeszlosci to uzywamy czasownika w formie przeszlej.
Licze na naj :)
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Last summer I was in Mielno with my friends. We spend a week there. All time was warm n sunshine. We lived near to sea in Willa Amba. There was beautiful and clean. We slept long because we went to bed late. We had really active holidays. We swim in sea ride a bike n run. (to zdanie troche nie ma sensu..) We were very happy but tired after return.
Myśle ze tak bedzie troche lepiej ;) mam nadzieje ze nic nie pomylilam..