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PROSZĘ O SPRAWDZENIE BŁĘDÓW!!!

I'm sorry that so long didn't write to you, but i didn't have time. In last Friday's cousin came to me. She looks completly different. Two years ago, when i saw her the last time she was plumb, blonde girl. Now she is slim, tall and she has got black hair. Formely wore black, loose clothes without additives. She didn't have pierce ears. Now wears short skirts, colorful tops and trousers in different patterns. She has three errings in the ear. On her right schoulder has a tattoo-roses. She looks divinely. See you.

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I'm sorry that I didn't write to you for so long, but I didn't have time. Last Friday my cousin visited me. She looks completly different. Last time I saw her, two years ago, she was a plump, blonde girl. Now she is slim, tall and she has got black hair. Formely she wore black, loose clothes without additives. She didn't have pierced ears. Now she wears short skirts, colorful tops and trousers in different patterns. She has three errings in one ear. On her right schoulder she has a tattoo that looks like roses. She looks awesome. See you.

Zmieniłam słowo devinely, bo nie używa się go w takich sytuacjach. Lepsze jest awesome, czyli cool i odjazdowe. :)

Mam nadzieję, że pomgłam, liczę na naj! :)