Question

Proszę o sprawdzenie błędów w tym opisie ...

The girl that I am going to decribe is called Ania. I have known her for five months. I met her first at the beginning of school year in my high school. She is my friend. We are in the same class.

Ania is sixteen years old. She is medium height and slim. Her complexion is pale. She has oval face. Her big, bright, green-grey eyes shows her humour and friendliness. Ania has got long eyelashes. Althought she has got small nose and medium mouth. Her face is framed by a mass of medium-length, straight, fair hair. She usually wears her hair loose. In every day life Ania is often casually,comfortable dressed in a blouse or T-shirt and jeans.

All in all, Ania is responsible that I can always count on her when I have a problem. In my opinion she is very nice and helpful. She is pretty.

Answer 1

The girl that I am going to decribe is called Ania. I know her since five months. First time I met her at the beginning of a school year in my high school. She is my friend. We are in the same class.

Ania is sixteen years old. She is medium height and slim. Her complexion is pale. She has oval face. Her big, bright, green-grey eyes shows her humour and friendliness. Ania has long eyelashes. Althought she has small nose and medium size mouth. Her face is framed by a mass of medium-length, straight, fair hair. She usually wears her hair loose. In every day life Ania is often casually,comfortable dressed in a blouse or T-shirt and jeans.

All in all, Ania is responsible that I can always count on her when I have a problem. In my opinion she is very nice and helpful person. She is pretty. 

Answer 2

Proszę o sprawdzenie błędów w tym opisie ...

The girl that I am going to decribe is called Ania. I have known her for five months.  I FIRST met her at the beginning of school year in my high school. She is my friend. We are in the same class.

Ania is sixteen years old. She is medium height and slim. Her complexion is pale. She has oval face. Her big, bright, green-grey eyes show (BEZ -S) her humour and friendliness. Ania has got long eyelashes. (PO CO ALTHOUGH TUTAJ?) she has got A small nose and A medium-SIZED mouth. Her face is framed by a mass of medium-length, straight, fair hair. She usually wears her hair loose. In everyday (RAZEM) life Ania is often dressed casually and comfortabLY in a blouse or A T-shirt and jeans.

All in all, Ania is responsible (NIE PASUJE TO DO ZDANIA NIE WIEM CO TO MIALO ZNACZYC??) that I can always count on her when I have a problem. In my opinion she is very nice and helpful. She is pretty.