Question

Proszę o sparwdzenie tego zadania.Dam naj.Jeśli okaże się, że jest źle a wy napiszecie, że dobrze to zgłoszę, ale nie przestraszcie się, tylko tak mówię.SZUKAM NAUCZYCIELA ANGIELSKIEGO ALBO SZPECA :)
My mum names's Halina. She has got 45 years. My mum likes read the books. She worked in the confectionery. She lives with our family.
My sister name's Katarzyna. She has got 16 years. My sister likes dance and listen to music. She goes to school in Łańcut. She lives with our family.
My dad names's Mariusz. He has got 45 years. My dad likes pick up mushrooms. He works as a railwayman. He lives with our family.
My sister names's Edyta. She has got 17 years. My sister likes watch TV. She goes to school in Łańcut. She lives with our family.
My grandmother names' Alina. She has got 69 years. My grandmother likes rest. She worked as a farmer. She lives next to our house.
My grandfather names's Stanisław. He has got 80 years. My grandfather likes read a newspaper. He worked as a firefighter. He lives next to our house.
My aunt names's Małgorzata. She has got 45 years. My aunt likes draw. She works in BISPOL in Łańcut. She lives in ...
My aunt names's Ewa. She has got 37 years. My aunt likes to go shopping. She works in the pizzeria. She lives in ...
My uncle names's Lesław. He has got 46 years. My uncle likes watch TV. He works as a driver. She lives in Rogóżno.
My aunt names's Krystyna. She has got 44 years. My aunt likes read the books. She works as a guardian older. She lives in ...

Czy wszystko jest ok, każda literka, żeby miało to jakiś sens wo góle.

Answer 1

Powinno być:
"My dad's/mum's/sister's/grandmother's/grandfather's/aunt's/uncle's/ name's"
"He/she is [liczba] years old"
Po "likes" czasownik z końcówką -ing: reading, dancing, listening, watching itd.
"reading books" bez "the"
Poza tym OK, a co miałaś na myśli pisząc "guardian older"?