Proszę o przeczytanie tego listu i napisanie widocznych błedów. Chodzi mi szczególnie o czas czy jest prawidłowo wykorzystany i jest to w czasie przeszłym, czyli opowiadam co się zdarzyło. W szczególności czas Past Simple ale też Past continous. Dear Monika, Hi! How are you? I hope you're very well. I've got so much to tell you that I don't know how to begin. I and my parents were in Italy. The weather was hot and sunny, every day I swim in the sea and went a long walk. I visited castle, town, museum, bridge and a lot of interested places. I met very nice Italian people they were really very friendly and happy. There were very great food and shop when my mother walked shopping I must go with her. I bought excellent a dres. We're in shop all day. I spent in this amazing country two week. I think I must come here next year and see this fantastic buldings and people! What are you doing in holiday? Do you want meeting with me? I'm waiting for you quick answer.
Love, xyz.
Dear Monika, Hi! How are you? I hope you're very well. I've got so much to tell you that I don't know how to begin. I and my parents were in Italy. The weather was hot and sunny, every day I swim in the sea and went a long walk. I visited castle, town, museum, bridge and a lot of interested places. I met very nice Italian people they were really very friendly and happy. There was very good food and shop when my mother walked shopping I had go with her. I bought excellent new dress. We're in shop all day. I spent in this amazing country two weeks. I think I must come here next year and see those fantastic buldings and people! What are you doing in holiday? do you want meet with me? I'm waiting for you quick answer.
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