Question

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The internet is a very helpful in the life on every human. A lot of people uses internet every day, as I. On the internet I can say is everything. I use internet for different things. I often visit wikipedia, youtube, facebook, plemiona. On the internet are a lot of websites thet help you in all. On the internet are a lot of webpages with information from country and the world. On the internet you can buy different things. Internet even though it has many pluses, it also has many minuses. On the internet are a lot of scammers. On the internet are sites with adult man video, which children can watches. Use the internet you can make from it and thus, can be contract vision, spine etc. So internet is very helpful if we use with him with sense, coution and moderation.

Answer 1

A lot of people use internet every day

On the internet I can say  everything

Zamiast slowa internet napisałabym there aby tak częste nie było on the internet

On the internet you can buy a lot of things

So internet is very helpful if we use him with sense, coution and moderation.

 

Answer 2

The internet is a very helpful in the life for every human. A lot of people use internet every day, for example I. In the internet I can find is everything. I use internet for different things. I often visit wikipedia, youtube, facebook, plemiona. In the internet are a lot of websites which help you in all. In the internet are a lot of webpages with information from country on the world. In the internet you can buy different things. Internet, even though it has many pluses, it also has many minuses. In the internet are a lot of scammers. In the internet are sites with vidoe for adult man, which children can watche. Use the internet you can make from it and thus, can be contract vision, spine etc( nie wiem o co chodzi w tym zdaniu). So internet is very helpful if we use him with sense, coution and moderation.