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Proszę o poprawienie, żeby było gramatycznie i dopisanie do 130 słów . Dzięki Loved Beata, How are you? I hope that everything is great. I apologise, that I didn't write to you so long but I was busy with the school and I had to study because I had many examinations. I have a new hobby, the friend held me for sailing, we swam on his boat on the fabulous lake Drawski I liked it I stated that I would be spending the free time this way. When I finish the school, I will be setting more time for swimming aside. there are holidays soon what you will be doing on them, I have a proposal perhaps for you to arrive to me and we would spend them with our friends. We will go camping to the camp, we will be singing songs and to swim on sailing boats. Of greeting to your friends and the family. Plenty of kisses, Bartek

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Dear Beata,
how are you? I hope that everything is great. I apologise, that I didn’t write to you for so long, but I was busy with the school. I had to study because I had many exams. I have a new hobby, my friend introduced me to sailing and we sailed on his boat on the fabulous lake Drawski. I liked it so much, that I plan to do it again next time I am free. When I finish the school, I will be spending more time swimming, too.
Soon there will be holidays – what will you be doing then? Perhaps you could come to me and we would spend them with our friends? We could go camping, we could be singing songs and sail yachts. Think about it, and let me know what you decide.
Greetings to your friends and family.

Plenty of kisses,
Bartek