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About ten years ago, in a small village near the Polish capital, lived a lonely woman with two children. She was 35 years and lived with their parents. They raised own grandchildren. Their mother had paid more attention to them, she behaved like a child.
She didn't work, sometimes earned money on friends. The money earned are applied in their own entertainment. She lived the moment. She wasn't responsible person. Constantly she met friends, went to the cinema and sit at the computer for hours watching the new fashion trends. She was interested in boys, has seldom been at home. She decided never to grow up. Her parents were helpless, loved his daughter and grandchildren. But they had more than sixty years and over time their health began to fail.
Soon her father died and her mother was in a sorry state. Family income was not financial. People began to feel hungry. An elderly woman moved in a wheelchair and pushed the daughter to find work and eventually grew up. Fortunately, a nearby supermarket gladly accepted the 35-year-old woman to the position of cashier. She met a good man whom she loved. He helped look after her children.
That woman was me. Today I am ashamed that I have met so late in life values. I haven't parents. I was neglected them when I could help them! My children were hungry, and I spent my time in clubs and I was abuse an alcohol. I lost so much, I regret that. I know that we need to behave according to our age. I have a loving husband and two grown children and grandson. I always repeat them that they must be responsible and that they didn't take me an example.
About ten years ago, in a small village near the Polish capital, lived a lonely woman with two children. She was 35 years and lived with their parents. They raised own grandchildren. Their mother had paid more attention to them, she behaved like a child.
She didn't work, sometimes earned money on friends. The money earned are applied in their own entertainment. She lived the moment. She wasn't responsible person. Constantly she met friends, went to the cinema and sit at the computer for hours watching the new fashion trends. She was interested in boys, has seldom been at home. She decided never to grow up. Her parents were helpless, loved his daughter and grandchildren. But they had more than sixty years and over time their health began to fail.
Soon her father died and her mother was in a sorry state. Family income was not financial. People began to feel hungry. An elderly woman moved in a wheelchair and pushed the daughter to find work and eventually grew up. Fortunately, a nearby supermarket gladly accepted the 35-year-old woman to the position of cashier. She met a good man whom she loved. He helped look after her children.
That woman was me. Today I am ashamed that I have met so late in life values. I haven't parents. I was neglected them when I could help them! My children were hungry, and I spent my time in clubs and I was abuse an alcohol. I lost so much, I regret that. I know that we need to behave according to our age. I have a loving husband and two grown children and grandson. I always repeat them that they must be responsible and that they didn't take me an example.
About ten years ago, in a small village near the capital of Poland, lived a 35 years old , lonely woman with two children. They lived with parents.
They raised own grandchild- co mniej więcej chciałaś przez to powiedzieć?
The money earned are applied in their own entertainment. -tego też nie rozumiem
She wasn't a responsible person. She constantly meet friends,go to the cinema and sit at the computer for hours watching the new fashion trends. She is only interested in boys and she seldom stay at home. She decided never to grow up. Her parents were helpless. They love their daughter and grandchildren, but they had more than sixty years and over time their health began to failing.
Soon her father died and her mother felt into despair. Family income was low. They began to feel hungry. An elderly woman moved in a wheelchair and pushed the daughter to find work and eventually grew up. Fortunately, a nearby supermarket accepted the 35-year-old woman for the cashier position . She met a good man who loved her. He was looking after her children.
That woman was me. Today I am ashamed that I have found life values so late. I don’t have parents. I was neglecting them instead of helping! My children were hungry, and I spent my time in clubs and I was alcohol abusing. (nie jestem tu pewna ale możesz zamiast tego napisać "I felt into alcoholism")
I lost so much, I’m regretting that. I know that we need to behave according to our age. I have a loving husband, two old children and grandson. I always repeat them that they must be responsible and that they shouldn’t take me as an example.