Proszę o poprawienie błędów.
OPISZ MOICH OSTATNICH URODZIN (czas przeszły)
On my last birthday:
I did wake up at 8am.
I washed myself.
Next I went go to shopping mall.
I didn't go to the circus because it was closed.
At the end of the day I went home to eat a cake.
OPISZ MOICH OSTATNICH URODZIN (czas przeszły)
On my last birthday:
I did wake up at 8am.
I washed myself.
Next I went go to shopping mall.
I didn't go to the circus because it was closed.
At the end of the day I went home to eat a cake.
Odpowiedź:
on my last birthday
i woke up at 8am, i washed myself (poprawniej by było i took a shower/ bath - wziełam prysznic/kąpiel lub można dodać i brushed my teeth and got dressed - wymyłam zęby i ubrałam się)
after i got ready i went shopping in the mall (można dodać co kupiłaś ubrania - clothes a poster - plakat) i didnt go to the circus because it was closed (można dodać że sadly i didn't go - niestety nie mogłam iść żeby było kontekstu do twoich urodzin)
at the end of the day i went home and ate some cake (można dodać opis np. delicious- smaczny)
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np.
on my last birthday
i woke up at 8am, i took a shower, brushed my teeth and got dressed after i got ready i went to go shopping in the mall and bought a new poster for my birthday. Sadly i didn't go to the circus because it was closed. At the end of the day i went home and ate some delicious cake.
np.
na ostatnich moich urodzinach
wstałam o 8 rano, wziełam prysznic, umyłam zęby i ubrałam się, gdy skończyłam poszłam na zakupy w galerii i kupiłam nowy plakat na moje urodziny. niestety nie mogłam iść do cyrku ponieważ był zamknięty. po skończeniu dnia poszłam do domu i zjadłam pyszne ciasto.
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