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Londyn, 28.05.2011

Dear Maja,

Thanks for you Letter. I’ve Got so much tell you about my yesterday’s picnic.
I Got up at 7:00, because I arranged with my friend for a picnic In the meadow. Dressed and went to make breakfast. I like to eat sandwiches for breakfast, so I ate bred with lettuce, cheese, tomato and drank the tea. About 8:00 we went to the glade Bicycles. We talked, laughed and went for a walk. After several hours we were hungry and went back home. We cooked potatoes and I made a salad. To drink compote. We ate a roast chicken. A dinner was proud. Then we went to the lake and talking about the holidays. At 20:00 we went home. This day was wunderful.
Write what you do In your spare time. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Greetings,
Marta ;-)

TYLKO NIE WPUSZCZAJCIE KITÓW ŻE NIE MA BŁĘDÓW BO WIEM ŻE SĄ I NIE UWIERZE ZE WSZYTSKO DOBRZE ! ;-)

Answer 1

Londyn, 28.05.2011

Dear Maja,

  Thanks for you letter. I’ve got so much to tell you about my yesterday’s picnic.
  I got up at 7:00, because I arranged a picnic with my friend on the meadow. I got dressed and went to make the breakfast. I like to eat sandwiches for breakfast, so I ate bread with lettuce, cheese, tomato and drank the tea. About 8:00 we went to the glade Bicycles. We talked, laughed and went for a walk. After several hours we were hungry, so We went back home. We cooked some potatoes and I made a salad, also we drank stewed fruit . We ate a roast chicken. We were so proud of our dinner. Then we went to the lake and talked about the holidays. At 20:00 we went home. This day was wonderful.
  Write what you do in your spare time. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Greetings,
Marta ;-)

Answer 2

How are you doing? (Pierwsze zdanie powinno się odnosić do adresata...) Thanks for your letter.

 

I will write you abaut my yesterday picnic. It was awfull... I get up at 7:00, because I hada lot todo with my friends. The first thing who I did, was tasty breakfast. I like to eat sandwiches, so I ate bred with lettuce, cheese, tomato and drank the tea. About 8:00 we went to the glade Bicycles. We talked, laughed. (z tym went w tym miejscu wychodzilo masło maślane).

After several hours we were hungry and went back home.  ThenI got theidea.I proposeddoinglunch. My friends will help me, so we are together prepare food. I peel potatos, my best friend Joanna mix chicken with lettuce... To drink compote. A dinner was proud. Then we went to the lake and talking about the holidays. Sun was sunshine, water was warm. It was wonderful day.

 

Write what you do In your spare time. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Greetings,
Marta ;-)