Proszę o poprawienie błędów i w miarę możliwości dodanie kilku zdań żeby rozwinąć to, co już napisałam.
Temat listu: skarga do właściciela linii kolejowych Pan-Anglo Rail.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to complain about the conditions of a journey I took a week ago by your train. Due to your advertisement I expected a pleasant journey. Unfortunately, it was not.
First of all, when I arrived at the station and bought a ticket, I had to wait for a train which arrived an hour later than it was planned.
Moreover, a compartment which I sat in, was very dirty. There were some plastic bottles and papers on the floor.
To make matters worse, when I wanted to eat dinner and went to the restaurant car, I had to wait long for the waiter, even though there were almost no people in this car. Then, I had to wait long for the food I had ordered and when I got it, it was untasty and cold.
I expect full refund as well as apology. I would be grateful for a prompt reply.
Yours faithfully,
xxx zzz
"conditions of a journey I took" - the journey. Narzekasz na konkretna podroz.
Ogolnie dobre jest, nie ma co poprawiac ;)