Question

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My life. I was born 6marth1996 years, in Glowno. aged six months I had the first operation. I went to kindergarten at the age of two years. I as a small child I was very quiet and peaceful. I as a child I do not smiled. after graduating I went to nursery school. in this school, I met many friends. when I was nine years old I went through another operation's. when I was ten yaers old I started to ride a horse. I learned many things. I'm belonged to the Scouts. I often went on holiday.after finishing primary school I went to high school. by that time I went three more operation.

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Answer 1

My life. I was born 6marth1996 years, in Glowno. While I was six months I was have the first operation. I went to kindergarten at the age of two years. I as a small child I was very quiet and peaceful. I as a child I wasn't smile. after graduating I went to nursery school. in this school, I was many friends. while I was nine years old I went through another operation's. while I was ten yaers old I started to ride a horse. I learned many things. I'm belonged to the Scouts. I often went on holiday.after finishing primary school I went to high school. by that time I went three more operation.

 

Ogólnie nie ma chyba tak dużo blędów.

Answer 2

My life. I was born at 6th of March in 1996, in Glowno. When I was six months I had the first operation. I went to kindergarten at the age of two years. As a small child I was very quiet and peaceful. When I was a child I do not smiled. After graduating I went to nursery school. In this school, I met many friends. When I was nine years old I went through another operation's. At the 10th year of my life I started to ride a horse. I learned many things. I'm belonged to the Scouts. I often go on holiday.After finishing primary school I went to middle  school. By that time I went three more operation.

 

 Ogólnie praca jest dobrze napisana lecz za dużo razy powtarzasz when I was.

Mieszasz czasy .Aha i po primary school jest middle school.Czyli po szkole podstawowej jest gimnazjum ;)