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There are few people today who could exist without technology. Modern inventions make life a easier. Over the last years communication between people become simpler. Through technology, many tasks can be performed much faster. Nevertheless, the invention of technology also has its drawbacks.
By mobile phone or internet we can send text messages and talk with other people. By social networking, we can find friends with whom we had no contact. Moreover for us panes enable the access to the information even from the most distant. However nothing is perfect, frequent using devices which are replacing us in many everyday situations causes that in the moment of their lack we aren't able to advise oneself. The fact is frighteningly large number of human would not manage to deal without it.
Another useful device is GPS, which helps us to efficiently reach to target. Even though it may indicate us wrong direction. The last new feature is Google Glass. This is a type of wearable technology with an optical head-mounted display. This device allows to communicate with the Internet via voice commands. This technology makes life even easier, but I think that it is crossing the border. Using modern technology should be careful, because people become robots.
To sum up, I would like to emphasize that the development of technology changed our life. Today life is faster and more challenging, so we need smart devices. I believe that if we could use new inventions in a right way, they could be very beneficial.
There are few people today who could exist without technology. Modern inventions make life a easier. Over the last years communication between people become simpler. Through technology, many tasks can be performed much faster. Nevertheless, the invention of technology also has its drawbacks.
By mobile phone or internet we can send text messages and talk with other people. By social networking, we can find friends with whom we had no contact. Moreover for us panes enable the access to the information even from the most distant. However nothing is perfect, frequent using devices which are replacing us in many everyday situations causes that in the moment of their lack we aren't able to advise oneself. The fact is frighteningly large number of human would not manage to deal without it.
Another useful device is GPS, which helps us to efficiently reach to target. Even though it may indicate us wrong direction. The last new feature is Google Glass. This is a type of wearable technology with an optical head-mounted display. This device allows to communicate with the Internet via voice commands. This technology makes life even easier, but I think that it is crossing the border. Using modern technology should be careful, because people become robots.
To sum up, I would like to emphasize that the development of technology changed our life. Today life is faster and more challenging, so we need smart devices. I believe that if we could use new inventions in a right way, they could be very beneficial.
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BY USING mobile phone or THE Internet we can send text messages and talk with/TO other people. By USING social networking, we can find friends with whom we had HAD no contact BEFORE. Moreover, for us panes???? enable the access to the information, even from the most distant PLACES. However, nothing is perfect. Frequent usE OF devices, which are replacing us in many everyday situations, causes that in the moment of their lack we aren't able to advise oneself???. The fact is, frighteningly large number of humanS would not manage to deal without it.
Another useful device is GPS, which helps us to efficiently reach OUR DESTINATION . Even though it may LEAD US IN THE / TAKE US IN THE wrong direction. The last new feature is Google Glass. This is a type of wearable technology with an optical head-mounted display. This device allows to communicate with the Internet via voice commands. This technology makes life even easier, but I think that IT CROSSES the LINE. Using modern technology should be DONE IN A CAREFUL MANNER / WAY / FASHION, because people MAY / WILL become robots.
To sum up, I would like to emphasize that the development of technology HAS changed our life. Today life is faster and more challenging, so we need smart devices. I believe, that if we could use new inventions in aN APPROPPRIATE way, they could be very beneficial.
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