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Proszę o pomoc w sprawdzeniu listu i poprawieniu błędów

Hi Adam
thank you for your last letter. I spend a holiday in Kraków with friends. Here I found a casual job as a waitress in a restaurant, "rules". Hop in a family where I live is very nice. Well and gets along with and nice to spend time with them. In the week running to the south in the afternoon I go to the pool with Tom and Paula. On weekends, I visited the city. I really like here Krakowskie sukiennice and Bazylika Mariacka. Kraków is a very beautiful city, there are a lot of monuments and museums.
I hope that I come here ever again.
I send warm greetings
Kisses
XYZ

Answer 1

Hi Adam
thank you for your last letter. I spend a holiday in Kraków with friends. Here I found a casual job as a waitress in a restaurant, "rules". Hop in a family where I live is very nice. Well and gets along with and nice to spend time with them. In the week running to the south in the afternoon I go to the pool with Tom and Paula. On weekends, I visited the city. I really like here Krakowskie sukiennice and Bazylika Mariacka. Kraków is a very beautiful city, there are a lot of monuments and museums.
I hope that I come here again.
I send warm greetings
Kisses
XYZ

 

Wyrzuciłam tylko te even z: I hope that I come here again.

 

Reszta jest super !

Answer 2

 

Wydaje mi się , że  :

1. zamiast go - ma być went   [ ponieważ piszesz w czasie przeszłym :  ]