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The holiday of 2011 I and my family were in Bahama.One morning the weather like is warm and hot.After breakfast me and my sister Paulina decided to takes photo.

This day I am a photographer .We heard thunder, but we went to the beach.Paulina posed on background of the sea.When I told ''Smile ! '' I saw very huge ligtning. It started to rain and wind.We come back to the hotel. After that in hotel we ate lunch. Then everything began shake self( to miało być : wszystko zaczęło się trześć) I told ''What's going on ? '' I felt terrified and worried but one minutes later everything stoped. We went to the reception. The Bahamian said ''Eartquake, earthquake !'' The weather like is bad: we ccould hear the strong wind outside , so we became in hotel withmany people. One girl started to cry . Someone take a phone.

We went to outside as soon as the wind and storm stopped. We felt shoced. The trees on the street damaged cars all over but I felt relived. Two days later we back to kome. It was the most frigteaning experience I have ever had .

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The holiday of 2011 I and my family were in Bahama.One morning the weather was  warm and hot.After breakfast I and my sister Paulina decided to take photo.

This day I was a photographer .We heard thunder, but  we went to the beach.Paulina posed on background of the sea.When I told ''Smile ! '' I saw very huge ligtning. It started to rain and wind.We come back to the hotel. After that in hotel we ate lunch. Then everything began shake self( to miało być : wszystko zaczęło się trześć) I told ''What's going on ? '' I felt terrified and worried but one minutes later everything stopped. We went to the reception. The Bahamian said ''Eartquake, earthquake !'' The weather like is bad: we ccould hear the strong wind outside , so we became in hotel with many people. One girl started to cry . Someone take a phone.

We went outside as soon as the wind and storm stopped. We felt shoced. The trees on the street damaged cars all over but I felt relived. Two days later we went back to home. It was the most frigtening experience I have ever had .