Question

Proszę dobre osoby z j. angielskiego o poprawienie błędów. DAM NAJLEPSZE

I spent summer holidays at home. Everyday getting up at 10 o'clock is something that i like. I met my friend and we did a joint trip to the city. To ride to the pool. In the summer my dog died, after which the whole family was crying. There were also no family visits to Krakow. Usually i played computer games and watch films.

Answer 1

I spent my summer holidays at home. 

 

 I met my friend and we did a joint trip to the city. We wanted to get to the swimming pool (tak jakoś ładniej brzmi). 

In the summer died my dog (mówisz o fakcie, a nie o czynności, którą wykonał twój pies). Whol my family were/was crying after his death (może być albo was albo were, bo family to rzeczownik zbiorowy) 

Usually i played computer games and watched films.

Mam nadzieję, że pomogłam. Mogę prosić o naj?