Question

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The girl that I am going to decribe is called Ania. I have known her for five months. I first met her at the beginning of school year in my high school. She is my friend. We are in the same class.

Ania is sixteen years old. She is medium height and slim. Her complexion is pale. She has oval face. Her big, bright, green eyes show her humour and friendliness. Ania has got long eyelashes. Althought she has got small nose and large mouth. Her face is framed by a mass of medium-length, straight, fair hair. She usually wears her hair loose. In every day life Ania is often casually,comfortable dressed in a blouse or T-shirt and jeans.

All in all, Ania is responsible that I can always count on her when I have a problem. In my opinion she is very nice and helpful. She is good-looking.

Answer 1

**I met her fist**** <- inna kolejnośc (podałam poprawną). Zamiast "we are in the same class" mozesz napisac "we are classmates" . zdanie o oczach : zamiast show , showS.