Question

Proszę bardzo bardzo mocno o sprawdzenie tego, co napisze niżej. Część jest napisana po angielsku ale nie jestem pewną czy dobrze, to co napisałam po polsku trzeba przetlumaczyc. (Nie mam pojęcia jak...). Jest to list o mojej ulubionej reklamie, Milki.
My favourite advert is advert chocolate milka. In this advert, there are two people :a women and a men and one animals:cow. The women is wearing flowery pink dress. She goes shopping. The men wearing blue jeans and a plain red T-Shirt. The cow has a purplish-white spots. Cow pushes Hand women. They're catch for hands. Cow gives them chocolate. They begin to dance and sing.
This is an advert for a company which Sells sweets. It seems to me that they are trying to sell sweets for dach, because the advert is happy and (łatwo ją zapamiętać).
Lubie tą reklamę bo uwielbiam czekoladę. W dodatku w tle reklamy słychać moją ulubioną piosenkę.
Pozdrawiam
Proszę, bez tlumacza

Answer 1

My favourite ad is ad chocolate milka. In this ad, there are two people :a women and a men and one animal :cow. The women is wearing flowery pink dress. She is going shopping. The men wearing blue jeans and a plain red T-Shirt. The cow has a purplish-white spots. Cow pushes Hand women. They're catch for hands. Cow gives them chocolate. They begin to dance and sing. 
This is an ad for a company which sells sweets. It seems to me that they are trying to sell sweets for dach, because this ad is happy and (it's easy, to remember her).
I like this ad because I love chocolate! And, in the background you could listen my favourite song. 
With the best wishes.