Proszę aby ktoś sprawdził moje "wypracowanie" ,poprawił błedy.
Wypracowanie dotyczy mojej 18 którą zrobie w przyszłości.
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I'm having a 18 th brithday on 26.I'm inviting my friends and neightbours.On my 18th brithday we eat special food pizza, cake, chips, ice cream, fizzy drinks and beer. Leater my friend organising barbecue or bonfire. Band Eris Is My Homegirl perfoming in my party. They playing two music. 18th brithday star in my house at 7:00 and finish at 2:00.
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I'm having 18th birthday on 26 (misiąc bym dodał).
I'm inviting my friends and neighbours. - OK
On my 18th birthday we will eat special food like a pizza, a cake, chips, ice creams......
Later my friend is organising barbecue or bornfire.
"Band Eris Is My Homegirl perfoming in my party" - dziwne zdanie.
They are playing music. (two ? grają dwie muzyki??)
18th birthday will start at 7:00 and finish at 2:00.