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It happened on the day of first July. Me and my friend, Matthew was on holiday in Italy. We chose this country because of warm climate, and crystal water in the sea. Hotel was really terrible, when we arrives there, hotel service didn’t changed our bedclothes. Also we had some kind of bugs in toilet, but it is nothing compared to what happened to us later.
After unpacking we decided to go on the beach. There was amazing, no clouds and warm water. On the beach was drink bar and special place to play volleyball. We left our clothes and rest stuff on towel and went take bath in the sea.
When we came back we realized that we have only our clothes. Somebody stole our cameras, mobile phones and the most important things, our documents including passports. We decided to go on the police and report it.They didn’t help us to much, everything what they did it is assured us that they will handle it. But we didn’t have much time, our plane had to fly for 2 days. Fortunately, we met our Polish friends, they was in exactly same situation like we. They told us to not panic and we should go to Polish Embassy they will help us for sure. So we did like they said.
All ended well only because of our friends help. If not they I don’t know how it could ends. Next time I will left my important documents in hotel safe.
" Me and my friend, Matthew was" - were
"warm climate, and crystal water" - usunąć przecinek
"Hotel was really terrible" - jakiś przedrostek przed hotel ( the, our)
"when we arrives there" - arrived
"hotel service didn’t changed our bedclothes." - hasn't yet changed
"There was amazing" - skoro beach to it
"On the beach was drink bar " - there was ...
" special place" - + a przed
" rest stuff" - rest of the stuff
"on towel " - on the towel
" we have only our clothes" - we had bo to przeszłość
"We decided to go on the police" - to the police (station)
"They didn’t help us to much" - too jak już ...
"everything what they did it is assured" - everything they did was assuring us
"our plane had to fly for 2 days" - nie pojmuje tego zdania ale napewno jest błędnie.
"they was in" - they were....
"and we should go to Polish" - and that we should go
"Polish Embassy they will help" - zero zespojenia zdań
" All ended well only because of our friends help" - thanks to our friends help
" If not they I don’t know" - if it wasn't for them ...
"it could ends" - it would end
"Next time I will left my important documents in hotel safe" - leave nie left
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