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Hi Jinny!
I’m on Holiday In Innsbruck near high mountains-Apls with my sister. We’re visiting her friend, Milena. Today we saw an rescue.
The rescue happened while we going to Milena’s house. A large avalanche coming in the most higher mountain. We was a safe distance, but we saw a women which fleeing before an avalanche. Suddenly, two men on a scooter, as soon as racer, grabbed her, and save her life! We watching like they tray escape, avalanche was right behind them. They turned behind house, and they saved himself. Everyone was okay. Women thanks for rescue, and invited him to her house.
When I come back to home, we need to go to the cinema. What do you think? I want to see that new film Kung fu Panda 3! Tell me about your holiday!
Bye!
Emily
Hi Jinny!
I’m on Holiday In Innsbruck near high mountains-Apls with my sister. We’re visiting her friend, Milena. Today we saw an rescue.
The rescue happened while we going to Milena’s house. A large avalanche coming in the most higher mountain. We was a safe distance, but we saw a women which fleeing before an avalanche. Suddenly, two men on a scooter, as soon as racer, grabbed her, and save her life! We watching like they tray escape, avalanche was right behind them. They turned behind house, and they saved himself. Everyone was okay. Women thanks for rescue, and invited him to her house.
When I come back to home, we need to go to the cinema. What do you think? I want to see that new film Kung fu Panda 3! Tell me about your holiday!
Bye!
Emily