Question

Potrzebuje pomocy w sprawdzeniu napisanego tekstu :)

Prosiłabym kogoś kto umie ten język (nie google tłumacz) aby sprawdził jakie błędy zrobiłam i je poprawił :)

DRAMATIC SCENE

This was the dramatic scene in London yesterday. A car fell into a hole in the road while it was travelling . Seven people were trapped it the car for two hours.

The incident began at ten o'clock. A car fell into a hole, while ride. As soon saw the problem, I called the police and ambulance .

At first there was light panic. People running and screaming. As soon as rescue started people, all calmed myself.

After two hours, seven people staying in car ,was released. Later, one of them said : 'It was the worst experience of my life. '

Z góry dziękuje za pomoc C:

Answer 1

Twój tekst wygląda jak by go ktoś bardzo "fachowo" tłumaczył googlowym tłumaczem :D

Moje propozycje:

W2 zdaniu: A car falled into a hole in the road while it was on move.

 

Zamiast "A car fell into a hole, while ride. As soon saw the problem, I called the police and ambulance" - When i saw it, I have called the police and an ambulance. (bez zbędnych powtórzeń)

At first there was light panic. People running and screaming. As soon as rescue started people, all calmed myself. >>>>>>>>> People were in panic, some of them were running around but they calmed down, when the ambulance arrived.

After two hours seven people from the crashed car were freed (od free). Later, one of them said: "It was the worst experience in my whole live"