Poprosił bym o sprawdzenie poprawności gramatycznej i wprowadzenie ewentualnych poprawek.
Z góry dziękuję :).
“Nowadays a lot of people are into sport. Why ? What is your attitude towards sports ?”
I think that nowadays sport is everywhere and more and more people are interested in it. It’s very good for our society, because everyone knows that sport is the best way to spend our leisure time . But there’s one question ? Why so much of people are interested in it?
Firstly ,sport is a great way to take advantage of our free time. When we do a lot of sports we increase our strange and condition and keeping your health on good level. We like to spend time on fresh air, but walking around is quite boring, then we begin to play football or basketball. In lot of countries we can do it for free, there are a lot of basketball courts or football fields where we can come with our ball and start the games with our friends.
The second, but also very important reason which could explain us growing interest about sports is variety of disciplines which we can choose. According on how much money we have to spent on our sport hobby we can do free sports like jogging, or much more expensive like cycling or skiing and ending on the most expensive sports like car racing or paragliding.
The third and the last option is very simple. Also, It is my personal attitude. This reason why I like to do sports. What’s better than go with a group of friends on beach with all kite boarding stuff, and chilling when we waiting for good wind or having fun on water while we surfing.
Summing up, people are still being more interested in sport because they can choose what they have to do , and they do it. Of course some sports is too expensive, but is very low percent of it. Also when we do it with our friends we improves ours moods , and feeling free doing that what we like.
Of course some sports are too expensive, but is very low percent of it.
a reszta sie wydaje ok :)