Poprawi mi ktoś błędy w tym? Wiem, że poplątałam coś z czasami, pisałam chyba w Present Simple i Past Simple :( a całość musi być z końcówkami "s" np ASK - ASKS . Tutaj jest mój tekst :
A boy and girl meet on a cafe. He asks her name. Her name is Perrie and his name's Zayn. He asks her out. They goes to the cinema and Perrie falls in love with Zayn, and Zayn falls in love with Perrie. Two months later they gets married. Perrie have an argument to Zayn, because he comes back later from work. She wants a divorce, because she thought that Zayn meets with another girl. He explains that he had to stay at work longer, but she didn't believe him. A few days later they get divorced. Zayn at the beginning was a little sad, but then he realized that he really didn't love her. Some time later Perrie wants to go back to Zayn, but he has already found his true love - Pheobe. Perrie was vesry sad and cried every day. She didn't want to be with another guy, so she went to the convent, because she wants to be u nun.
Jezu, raz pisałam w czasie przeszłym, raz z końcówkami "s". POMOCY ;(
Skoro to ma być historia, to raczej w czasie Past Simple.
A boy and girl met in a cafe. He ased about her name. Her name is Perrie and his name's Zayn. He ased her out. They went to the cinema and Perrie fell in love with Zayn, and Zayn fell in love with Perrie. Two months later they got married. Perrie had an argument to Zayn, because was coming back later from work. She wanted a divorce, because she thought that Zayn is meeting with another girl. He explained that he had to stay at work longer, but she didn't believed him. Few days later they got divorced. Zayn at the beginning was a little sad, but then he realized that he really didn't love her. Some time later Perrie wanted to go back to Zayn, but he had already found his true love - Pheobe. Perrie was very sad and was crying every day. She didn't want to be with another guy, so she went to the convent, because she wanted to be u nun.
A boy and a girl met in a cafe. He ased about her name. Her name is Perrie and his name's Zayn. He ased her out. They went to the cinema and Perrie fell in love with Zayn, and Zayn fell in love with Perrie. Two months later they got married. Perrie had an argument with Zayn, because was coming late from work. She wanted to get divorced, because she thought that Zayn is meeting an another girl. He explained that he had to stay at work longer, but she didn't believe him. Few days later they got divorced. Zayn at the beginning was a little sad, but then he realized that he really didn't love her. Some time later Perrie wanted to go back to Zayn, but he had already found his true love - Pheobe. Perrie was very sad and was crying every day. She didn't want to be with another guy, so she went to the convent, because she wanted to be u nun.
to jest w sumie poprawiony komentarz, ten co jest wyzej xd