Question

Poprawcie mi błędy w tym wypracowaniu bd wdzięczna :D Błędne odp zgłaszam !!!!

Hi julia !
Thank you for your email. For me, all right. A week ago I was on a great large shopping with my friends in Sanok. Let my tell you about this.
When we were on site, first went to the shop- house. There I bought a beautiful blue sweater and grey cap. Then we went to the shop- cropp. I saw here's a great shoe. Unfortunately i didn't bought them, because they were very expensive. I bought trouser and green great sweater. We were also in other shops, wewe I bought two T- shirts. Shopping was very successful! I am happy that I bought so much a lot of things!
You will come to me as quickly as possible. Let me show you what I bought.
Take care of yourself.
Love.
Klaudia

Answer 1

Masz wszystko dobrze ale zamiast tego love napisz :

i greet - to znaczy pozdrawiam :) .

Mam nadzieje że pomogłam :) i że dostaniesz 5 :) pozdrawiam :D

Answer 2

I'm all right.

One week ago ....

Let me tell you something about it. 

At first we went to the shop called "house". .... .

Then we went to the cropp.

I saw there's ..... .

I bought trousers and lovely green sweater.

.... in other shops where I bouht ... 

I'm happy becouse of my new clothes. 

You shoul come to me as quickly as it's possible. 

Let me show you what I have bought. 

Take care.