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Hi Emily,
How are you? I hope you're very well. I'm writing to inform you about film "The Secret".
In this film scientics present how to by happy. They said then to by happy we must attract luck. We must believe then thoughts become things and we are the Michaelangelo of our life.
The film presents human, who was a gay. In his job friends did him practical jokes. He tried to by a stand-up comedian, but people didn't lough at him. Homophobics was bullied him on the streets.
One day he thinks then he is a good person, he is funny and he don't must be afraid. He knows then he is a human like everyone. When he started think positively - his live started by possitively.
In my opinion this strategy is great. If we have bad humour then we see world in black colours. But when we are happy then people feel that and smile for us, be nice and friendly. Our mood govern for our occurrence.
What I think about I bring about. If i think positively - a world is positively. Everythink turns easier.
I think then I'll start use "The Secret" but I want be happy. I think then you want it too. You must watch this film!
I look forward to hearing from you soon. Write me what you think about "The Secret"
Yours,
Marta
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