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Last summer i was in home in Wien for a Holiday. I was witch my aunt. It was raining. The wind was blowing all the time. We were watching tv then suddenly we heard horrible noise. It come from kitchen. We were very scared but we go to in. we saw a horrible ghost! It was half woman half man. It wearing a black t-shert and red skirt. It had half woman half man face. It went for us! We felt horrible. Suddenly this creature explode! In the end we told my sister about the ghost. She didn’t believe us!
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Nie jestem pewna, czy pierwsze zdanie jest dobrze, ale wg mnie brzmiałoby lepiej jako:
Last summer I was on holiday in Wien.
Później może..
The weather was bad - it was raining and the wind was blowing all the time. (małe wprowadzenie, bo to zdanie było jakby wyrwane z kontekstu)
We was watching TV WHEN suddenly...
We were wery scared, but we went to the kitchen. (nie ważne, że powtórzenie, w angielskim się o to nie czepiają ;> )
We saw a terrifying ghost (to bardziej pasuje)
It was half-woman, half-men (myślnik jest ważny)
It was wearing... T-shirt
We felt a giant fear (za dużo horrible ;>)
At the end of this day we told...
She wouldn't believe us
Myślę, że tak byłoby lepiej ;)
The weather was bad - it was raining and the wind was blowing all the time.
We was watching TV WHEN suddenly...
We were wery scared, but we went to the kitchen.
We saw a terrifying ghost
It was woman
It was wearing... T-shirt
We felt a giant fear
At the end of this day we told...
She wouldn't believe us