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SOCIAL LIFE
Every person has a social life - goog or bad, but he has. Firstly, I would like to think: what is the social life? In my opinion this is that, what are we doing after school or work.This is also our relationships with other people, for example: friends, class mates, colegues at work and people who are of our age. In my composition I want to write some about not successful social life.
First of all we need write something about reasons why people may not have a good social life. It could be because of different reasons, for example when these people aren't outgoing, sociable or they just want to be lonley. I think that some people come back home lately and they are tired after their work or school, and they think only about going to bed. We may have not successful social life also because of family problems, addictions (workalkoholic) or moving to new area.
Not successfl social life is a fairly common problem which causes we can lose contact with our friends, their truth, help. Twice effect that not having a good social life can be feeling we are lonley what may causes for example alkoholism.
Now I would like to write about ways of improving our social life. We need consider what we should do. Here are tha basic steps to making friends. First of all we need meet some new people. While it;s a little scary at first and there is some risk of rejection, we must be brave and patient! Twice advice is that we should invite friends to do something with us, for example a invitation for a lunch, a walk or a party - it could be really everything! We need also ask our friends, people at work or school for their phone number, email address, because then we won'r lose contact with them. Overall, I'd say that the easier thing to do is meeting friends our siblings, school mates.
To sum up we need learn how to make friends and get a good social life. I think the easiest way to naturally meet a lot of people is just to live a full, interesing life!
Every person has a social life - good or bad, but he has...(niedokończyłaś , więc nie wiem co wpisać)
Wg. mnie reszta jest dobrze.
Znaczy się masz tam kropke , gdzie ja postawiłam 3 kropki ,ale to nie jest logiczne zdanie.