Pomóżcie mi poprawić tekst żeby był sprawnie napisany bez byków i żeby było dobra odmiana !! <3 my school is great. has a lot of class, and I also have small and large field at the bottom we have a cafeteria and common room are also two halls one on top and one on the bottom we have a locker in which there are lockers for students and. near a large hall where we have a physical education which is very I like and I'd like to have it all day. I think that my school is great but sometimes gets a poor evaluation. My favorite subjects are PE, biology and English language.
MitsuMy school is great. We have a lot of classes and we also have a small and a large (sport?) field. At the bottom, we have a cafeteria and a common room. There are also two halls - one on top and one on the bottom. We have a locker-room in which there are lockers for students. Near a large hall, we have a physical education which I really like. And I'd like to have it all day. I think that my school is amazing but it sometimes gets a poor evaluation. My favourite subjects are PE, biology and English.
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NoNeededMy school is great. It has a lot of classes and a small and a large field at the bottom(na dole? to może: In the cellar - w piwnicy). There is a cafeteria and a common room. There are also two halls: one on the first floor and one on the groundfloor. We have a lockery where are lockers for students. Nearby, there is a large hall where we have a gymwhere I'd like to be all day. I think that my school is great but sometimes it gets a poor evaluation (co chciałaś napisac jako 'evaluation?). My favorite subjects are PE, biology and English.
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NoNeeded
właśnie, playground zamiast field. Jakoś nie rzuciło mi się w oczy.