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Hey Tom!
I wanted to tell you how I met my friend Mary. We met when she joined the class at the music school, and we became very friends. She has light hair, is tall and slim. She also has golden glasses and is very nice and likeable. Usually, when we meet, we talk about different matters or sometimes we do something in the kitchen (e.g. a cake)
I hope you will meet someday
All the best :)
Ania
Ps. daje najj

Answer 1

Odpowiedź:

Wydaje mi się że jedno zdanie powinno wyglądać tak ,, She has light hair. She is tall and slim"

Mam nadzieje że pomogłam

Answer 2

W zdaniu „She has light hair, is tall....” itd to powinno być „She has light hair. She is tall.......” itd.
Mi się jeszcze wydaje ze w zdaniu „We met when........” itd to powinno być „..... and we became very good friends” bo samo „very” tu nie pasuje według mnie.