Question

Pliiisss!Proszę o pomoc! Czy to jest dobrze napisane? !!! Jak źle proszę o poprawki ;)

My favourite is Britners Spears. I love her. Britney Spears is one of the most-known pop singer. She was born on 2nd December nineteen eighty-one.in Missisipi. She is 28 years old now. Her favourite hobby is dancing. She really loves it and she can do it. She dances in most of her telediscs. She also enjoys animals. She has a few dogs.

Her favourite sport is tennis. She is quite good at it. When she was small she won tennis competition. Britney has beautiful colour of eyes. They are chocolate. I really like it. Britney lives in the USA from born. She likes this country an she doesn't want to move.

Answer 1

wszystko jest dobrze tylko w pierwszym zdaniu dobrze by bylo napisac 

''My favourite singer is britney spears '' ale reszta w porzadku ;)

Answer 2

My favourite celebrity is Britney Spears. I love and adore her. Britney is one of the most well known pop singers. She was born of the 2nd Decemeber 1981 in Mississippi. She is 28 years old now. Her favourite hobby is dancing. She enjoys it and she can do it really well. Britney dances in most of her telediscs. She also love animals. She has a few dogs. 

Britney Spears' favourite sport is tennis. She is quite good at it. When she was younger, she competed in tennis competitions and won in most of them. Britney has beautiful eyes. She lived in the USA from when she was born. She likes her country and dosn't want to move.