Question

Please,bantuin buat recount pengalaman ceritaku di bawah ini.

Study Tour at Dufan
saat aku kelas 8,sekolahku mengadakan study tour ke dufan dan beberapa tempat lainnya.
saat tiba di dufan,aku sangat senang.Bersama dengan teman-temanku aku mencoba berbagai wahana permainan.Aku paling suka wahana ontang anting,bahkan aku mencobanya sampai dua kali.aku dan juga teman-temanku ingin mencoba wahana ice age,tetapi antriannya sangat panjang dan akhirnya kami tidak jadi mencoba wahana ini.

Answer 1

When i was 8 grade , my school held study tour to dufan and some place others.
when we arrived in dufan , i was very happy . i like ontang anting vehicle, moreover i tried it twice. me and my friends want to try ice age vehicle, but the queue so long and we can't tried that vehicle.

maaf yaa kalo grammar nya jelek:(

Answer 2

When i was at eight grade, my school conducted a study tour to Dufan and a few other places.
when we arrived at dufan, i was really happy. together with my friends we tried many different rides. the one that i like the most was the ontang-anting ride, i even tried it twice. me and my friends also wanted to try the ice age ride, but the queue was so long that at the end we didn't try the ride.