PILNE PLIIIS....Czy mógłby ktoś sprawdzić poprawność gramatyczną mojego listu: Dear Editor. I’am writing with connection with Jack Hug’s article which says that, the only girls should help parents with house work. I cannot agree with this conclusion. First of all, I strongly disagree with Mr Hug’s point that some of chores are more suitable for girls. That is not true. For example, my friend Eddie is amazing cook. He cooks better than his wife. His jobs has nothing in common with cooking, but he has this incredible ability since I can remember. Next, Mr Hug’s says that some chores are in women nature. He argued that women have preferences for some chores, because is a result of evolution and something they are born with. Of course I totally disagree with this statement, because each of us are different and we have different skills. The skills has nothing in common with our evolution. Finally, I know men who helps his wife and he doesn’t think it is something amazing to do this. My neighbor also help his girlfriend, every day I can see how he take out the rubbish or brings a dog for a walk. My brother always help our parents with house work. He washes dishes, mops the floor, do the shopping and this behave is normal for his. In my opinion boys should help parents with house work. It is not only women thing to clear the dishes, take out rubbish or do other things. I don’t want to insult Mr Hugs, but I think his statement from fact, when he was a young boy he was too lazy to help his parents with some chores. But it is only my opinion. Yours faithfull
Dear Editor. I’m writing a reflection to Jack Hug’s article, which says that only girls should help their parents with house chores. I don’t agree with that assumption. First of all, I strongly disagree with Mr. Hug’s point that some of chores are more suitable for girls. That is not true. For example, my friend Eddie is an amazing cook. He cooks better than his wife. His job has nothing in common with cooking, but since I can remember, he has that incredible skill. Next, Mr. Hug says that some chores are in women’s nature. He argued that women have preferences for some chores, because of a result of evolution and it’s something they are born with. Of course I totally disagree with this statement, because each of us is different and we have different abilities. Skills have nothing in common with our evolution. Finally, I know a man who helps his wife and he doesn’t think it is something weird to do. My neighbor also helps his girlfriend. Every day I see how he takes out the trash or takes their dog for a walk. My brother always helps our parents with different chores. He washes dishes, mops the floor, does the shopping and that behavior is normal for him. In my opinion, boys should help their parents with house work. It is not only women’s job to wash the dishes, take out trash or do other things. I don’t want to insult Mr. Hugs, but I think when he was a young boy he was too lazy to help his parents with some chores. But it is only my opinion. Yours faithful …
Mała sugestia. Mianowicie pozbyłbym się takich krótkich zdań jak: „That is not true.” albo „He cooks better than his wife.” Bardziej rozwinąłbym je niż się ich pozbył, ale to tylko sugestia.