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What are the advantages and disadvantages of studying
abroad?
Nowadays many people
are travelling to study abroad, looking for better opportunites to live. There
are many advantages and disadvantages of such a procedur. So the question is
whether is it better to go or is it better to stay?
On the one hand when you go to study abroad you can discover
new culture and new environment. On the other hand you’re left all alone in a
foreign country with no one to talk to. Loneliness is a big fear, but I think you’ll
find new friends, don’t worry.
Another argument for studying abroad is that after that studies
when you’re back in your country you can easily find a good job because of the
highest level of education and because you were good (and brave) enough to go
to learn abroad on your own.
However you need to have money for that studies. For most of
ordinary people it is a big problem unless you will work very hard on your
grades and maybe you can get a schoolarship.
In conclusion there are both advantages and disadvantages of
studying abroad, I believe that going abroad for studies can make you more
mature and independent.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of studying
abroad?
Nowadays many people
are travelling to study abroad, looking for better opportunites to live. There
are many advantages and disadvantages of such a procedur. So the question is
whether is it better to go or is it better to stay?
On the one hand when you go to study abroad you can discover
new culture and new environment. On the other hand you’re left all alone in a
foreign country with no one to talk to. Loneliness is a big fear, but I think you’ll
find new friends, don’t worry.
Another argument for studying abroad is that after that studies
when you’re back in your country you can easily find a good job because of the
highest level of education and because you were good (and brave) enough to go
to learn abroad on your own.
However you need to have money for that studies. For most of
ordinary people it is a big problem unless you will work very hard on your
grades and maybe you can get a schoolarship.
In conclusion there are both advantages and disadvantages of
studying abroad, I believe that going abroad for studies can make you more
mature and independent.
hej, parę słówek dodałem, parę zmieniłem, wydaje mi się, że podniosło to poziom już i tak bardzo dobrego wypracowania :)
many people are travelling = many people travel
better opportunites to live = for a living
of such a procedur = such dealings
go or is it better to stay = go or to stay
On the one hand = ???? lepiej daj First of all
friends, don’t worry. = friends. so don't worry.
after that studies = after graduating
find a good job = find a lucrative job
to have money for that studies. = to have funds for that studies
For most of ordinary people = for most of casual people
schoolarship = scholarship