Question

Pani na angielskim zadała nam pracę pisemną o tym co robiliśmy w ferie wielkanocne mam już prawie całe napisane ale nie mogę wymyślić jakiegoś zakończenia pomóżcie mi możecie od razu sprawdzić czy jest dobrze napisane. Eastern holidays started on 1 st April and finished on 7 th April. I spent my Eastern holidays with family. On sunday we ate breakfast and wnet to church. Later my cousin visitted to.next day we went to my grandma. I played there with her dog Mike and i took him for a walk. In the evening we came back to home. On tuesday my parents went to work. I and my brother stayed in home. We were learning and doing our homeworks because on next day began school.

Answer 1

Przepraszam że dużo pozmieniałam ale mieszkam w Londynie od kilku lat i niektóre ze zdań nie miały sensu wiec postarałam sie je ulepszyć . Myślę że tak brzmi lepiej ale ostateczna decyzja jest oczywiście w twoich rękach . Mam nadzieję że jakoś pomogłam .


Easter holidays started on 1st of April and finished on 7th of April .I spent my Easter holidays with my family . We ate the Easter breakfast and went to the church on Sunday . My cousin came to visit us .Next day we decided to go to my grandma's house. I played with her lovely dog  Mike . Moreover , I took him for a walk.It was already dark by the time we got home . My parents were working on Tuesday . My brother and I stayed at home doing our homework and getting ready to school which began on the next day . 

Answer 2

I spent Christmas with my family so much joy to look my holidays