One day I went with friends to a concert of my favorite band Linkin Park. . I was very happy, because it's always been my dream. Everything was planned and ordered tickets. The concert was about 17. We left an hour before. Before cash tickets were the crowds, because I was afraid that we are late, but the crowd quickly decreased and we got your tickets. We took the places and learned that the team late. All were angry because of this. We waited an hour. Despite the fact that the team was late, it was great. We came back very tired, home but it was worth it Proszę o sprawdzenie tekstu czy są błędy .. Prosiłbym gdyby były o poprawienie tekstu. Z góry dzieki :)
One day I went with friends to a concert of my favorite band Linkin Park. I was very happy (excited - podekscytowany lepiej brzminiż happy), because it's always been my dream. Everything was planned and I ordered tickets. The concert was about 5pm. We left an hour before. In front of the cash tickets were the crowds, because I was afraid that we are late, but the crowd quickly decreased and we got your tickets. We took the places and learned that the team (band - zespół ) is late. We all were angry because of this. We waited for an hour. Despite the fact that the team (band) was late, it was a great night. We came back home very tired, but it was worth it.
Wszystko zrozumiałe gramatycznie poprawnie, tylko na bold zanazczyłam rzeczy które bym zmieniła - chodzę do internatu w anglii to torche tam wiem, ale decyzja twoja ;)