Question

On Saturday I got up at nine o'clock. I washed and ate breakfast. Then I went shopping to buy a new T-shirt. When I came back I ate dinner. Next I went to meet with friends. In the afternoon I did homework. Then I watched the film. In the evening, I surfing on the net. Before going to bed, I read the book. I went to sleep about ten o'clock.

Czy jest to napisane poprawnie?

Answer 1

Mimo że "meet with" jest poprawne, lepiej byłoby pominąć "with", bo brzmi to nieco amerykańsko -> Next I went to meet my friends. Then I watched nie THE, ale A film, bo dla odbiorcy jest bliżej nieokreślony. In the evening I was surfing the Internet. Before going to bed, I read znowu nie THE, lecz A book. Poza tym wszystko ok.