Question

ocencie moja prace The Imitator By …………………………. My friend meet imitator. When jumped on Mars saw alien. Went to the alien. Alien saw my friend. ’Hi!’ said my friend loudly. ‘Hi!’ said alien loudly. My friend moved slowly to the left. The alien did the same. He sang and danced. The alien did the same. My friend became angry and hit alien. The alien did the same. ‘ I must escape’ thought my friend. My friend understood: this alien was the imitator. He went to the rocket, but alien did the same. He closed the door and went to the Earth. When left rocket team scientists caught imitator and took them to the laboratory. My friend ended his adventure.

Answer 1

praca jest ok. uważam, że powinieneś popracować nad szczegółami. Zdania powinieneś bardziej rozpudowywać aby były dowodem na twoją dużą wiedzę jezykową.

np. " He sang and danced" móglbyś napisać "suddenly he sang and danced. I don't know why" używaj różnych określników czasowych, to  wzbogaci twoją prace